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July 31st, 2008
12:56 pm abandonfic #1

( abandon fic! abandon fic!) Title: By Starlight Pairing: Severus/Sirius; extremely slight hint of past Severus/Regulus if you squint. Rating: PG Word count: ~2300 Summary: After an Order meeting, Sirius presents Severus with an unusual gift that seems to have more than one purpose. Warnings: None Why I give up: This is just an unexciting idea. The plot device is contrived and the whole thing just falls really flat. Treads close to being an astronomy lesson rather than a story. Trivia: this is the fic in regards to which many, many moons ago I posted a question, "Would you know what a planisphere is without looking up the word?" If you didn't know, you're about to find out. ( By Starlight )
01:12 pm abandonfic #2

( abandon fic! abandon fic!) Title: (none) Pairing: Severus/Sirius/Regulus Rating: NC-17 Word count: ~2100 Summary: So Sirius wants to play power games, eh? Severus is up for that. Warnings: Underage sex (the boys are 18/18/16, I think). Why I give up: Couldn't figure out for the life of me how to get the three of them into this situation (so the story as is begins in media res: Severus is sitting on the edge of a bed, Sirius is kneeling behind him, and Regulus is on the floor in front of Severus). Some of the sex description is boring and too expository. No clear idea about just what the heck I was trying to do. Lack of any characterization for Regulus and I don't know how to fix it. This is about the earliest pr0n I ever wrote and I've been sitting on it since last October. At that rate, it's never going to get finished. ( ...Sirius murmured in Severus's ear in a voice of brandied lust. )
02:43 pm abandonfic #3

( abandon fic! abandon fic!) Title: Undressed Books Characters: Severus/Lily Rating: very light PG Words: 370 Warnings: None Why I give up: I couldn't figure out how to get them into this situation and didn't even have any clear idea of whether this was meant to be AU. Also, it's just dull and seems to stop dead without being able to go on anywhere. ( Undressed Books )
02:52 pm abandonfic #4

( abandon fic! abandon fic!) Title: (none) Characters: Lily Rating: G Words: 189 Warnings: None Why I give up: Eh. This just bores me. The point of this was to have her catch some amusement or longing, have them meet later, and have him express an emotion that could only possibly be expressed with the mouth, which is wanting to kiss her, like, durhay. But I ain't feelin' it somehow. ( Many people are given to express insincere emotions... )
03:43 pm abandonfic #6: my snapedom summerfest failures

( abandon fic! abandon fic!) Title: (none — for Last Kiss) Characters: Severus/Lily Rating: PG Words: 140 Warnings: None Why I give up: The first stanza was inspired. The rest are just imitations. Trying to carry on poetry like this very rapidly starts sounding very forced. I would never have got this up to 1000 words (the fest minimum). ( Now kiss me again... )Title: (none - for Severus helps Draco brew Elixir of Euphoria) Characters: Severus, Lucius Rating: G Words: 79 Warnings: None Why I give up: I think it's pretty obvious. This is just going nowhere fast. ( I'm going to have to teach this brat... )Title: It's In the Script (for Beltane Rite NC-17, NWS) Characters: Severus mostly; Severus/Harry implied; various combinations of Severus/Harry/Draco also kinda implied Rating: strong PG-13 or soft R Words: ~840 Summary: The course of true dreaming ne'er did run smooth. Warnings: None Why I give up: Normally I have no problem with crack, but this is stupid crack, with a gimmick that only leads to exasperated head-shaking. Totally fails to deliver on smut; I just can't write Severus/Harry, I guess. ( It's In the Script )
04:12 pm abandonart

And just for larfs, here's two abandoned HP art memes, because, you know, I can't stinkin' draw. Silvercresent11's meme: ( some slightly large pictures )uppuN's meme: ( one more )The "ahem" is because "which" was misspelled as "wich" in the original. A lot of people just scribbled in the "h". I did something a little more involved, as you can see.
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